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Tuesday 4 September 2018

pirate and the crew.

Hello i am reading a book called pirate
And the crew. One by Leo took
us fishing then they all went off
to the Blue Sea.
when they were on Leo’s
boat they were
drawing black
moustaches on each.
Then they drew
scar’s with a red pen.
Then Pipiana sang we're the wickedest
wildest pirate crew to ever sail
the ocean blue. Then he strode around the deck.
Then she said it's
going too far. Then Uncle
Leo ‘’put that fish knife back in the bait’’ ‘’box now he said’
’ then suddenly the motor went like
chugga- splutter - splutter - splutter.
And then it stopped with puff of
blue smoke. then Uncle Leo
 looked more worried. Because a fresh wind was
blowing us away
all the way to south america.
Then they kept
working on the engine
until the
rescue boat circled around us
twice then
stopped alongside. They sow
pipiana was holding a big spanner.
Then they all
said the silliest pirata
crew to ever
sail the ocean blue then they Smiled..The end.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Casey. I like the way you add the word Uncle Leo indeed of Leo. Maybe next time you cold go back and cheek your words and don't rush it. But other wise I really like it by.

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