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Thursday 13 June 2019

Rock Climbing).

Sione is 13 . He Has light brown blue coloured hair. Sione was reaching his  arms and began to climb the rock climbing  as he reached for the rope. When sione reached the top of mt cook they felt pleased with himself but as he was.. he looked down and thought about it for a little then noticed he was on a rock he said... ‘’how i am going to get down’’!! He gulped. . With surprisement..?


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5 comments:

  1. Tayla-Jayne26 July 2019 at 09:05

    hi casey i loved your tiger magic story

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  2. Alexia1 August 2019 at 14:09

    Hi casey,
    I like the way you added your brothers name
    Maybe you could describe the rope with the colours
    This reminded me of the time we wrote about Camping store togther

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  3. Shanaya22 August 2019 at 14:41

    hoi casey im shanaya I wish I could see you in porson
    I like the way you put your brothers name and age
    next time you could discride things a little more
    this reminded me of the time at south hornby when we were wrighting.

    bye casey

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  4. Shanaya22 August 2019 at 14:42

    a story about the weekeds.

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  5. Casey22 August 2019 at 14:42

    thank you guys!
    Hope i will do more soon

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