Ship Sailed

The outstanding ship skimmed majestically

Until the foolish captain steered into a heavy tube shaped wave and got everyone flooded.

‘’My Six Sentence Short Story’’

This Week we learnt how to wsite a Six Sentence Short Story is a narrative and has Six parts. 1. Has ''one upon a time'' and introduces the main character.

2. Says there talent
3. Says there talent
4 Tells the problem
5. Tells how they felt
6.Tells how they got over the problem.

This is my ''Six Sentence Short Story''.
 

Rock Climbing).

Sione is 13 . He Has light brown blue coloured hair. Sione was reaching his  arms and began to climb the rock climbing  as he reached for the rope. When sione reached the top of mt cook they felt pleased with himself but as he was.. he looked down and thought about it for a little then noticed he was on a rock he said... ‘’how i am going to get down’’!! He gulped. . With surprisement..?