‘’My Six Sentence Short Story’’

This Week we learnt how to wsite a Six Sentence Short Story is a narrative and has Six parts. 1. Has ''one upon a time'' and introduces the main character.

2. Says there talent
3. Says there talent
4 Tells the problem
5. Tells how they felt
6.Tells how they got over the problem.

This is my ''Six Sentence Short Story''.
 

Rock Climbing).

Sione is 13 . He Has light brown blue coloured hair. Sione was reaching his  arms and began to climb the rock climbing  as he reached for the rope. When sione reached the top of mt cook they felt pleased with himself but as he was.. he looked down and thought about it for a little then noticed he was on a rock he said... ‘’how i am going to get down’’!! He gulped. . With surprisement..?

Magical Tiger by Casey

Magical  Tiger by Casey

One day there was a Human being  called Emma. Emma

Was a Venture tape  she loved to Venture  animals and

Sea  animals Ro  jungle animals one time she sow a

Tiger one girl Said  (that this was a magical tiger) she

She never believed her. But she was Telling the truth

But she never know.  She said (then take a Ride on it)

So what did she do… she Took  a Ride on it. The tiger

wilkes nicely and slowly. She looked  around on the

Tiger it did nothing then She saw  a Magical key on the

Tiger. Then when She was about to get off to get the necklace…

BOM the Magical key Send them to another dimension

She was shocked. She looked at all of the Mountains

Then She thinks to herself (the  tiger is Magical) then she changed her Mind...

to go on adventures with the Magical Tiger she now knows that the

Tiger was magical after  all. after all These Years by searching

She did it. (but the little girl did it... oh well the end) :3

Planning my exposition writing about    

 Make a copy of

this and put it in your WRITING folder.

‘Should fireworks be allowed to be

sold or should they only be in public

displays?’

1. Words you might want to use: (add your own other words from the
2. story and newspaper articles or from other research or texts). Think
3. STRONG, PERSUASIVE, EXAGGERATED words.

Negatives Massive damage	bushfires	Destruction / destroy	dangerous
explosive	injuries	hospital	pets/ horses/ dogs
matches
Positives Stunning display	beautiful	dazzling	Affordable for families
Have the right to...	freedom	choice	Get together with family
Chance to celebrate

1. The first paragraph needs to strongly state YOUR opinion.

So before you go any further what DO you think.

I strongly think that fireworks are Dangerous and we need to s top selling them

I feel this way because it made my cosen nearly cut her finger off

2. Now in the next paragraph or two you need
3. some FACTS to support your opinion.

Details, numbers, example stories go here.

Here are some example sentence starters,

or write your own on the blank table below.

Aim for 3 paragraphs at least.

One story that shows how dangerous home fireworks can be is... A cat has died after being strapped by to two rocket fireworks which were then lit and exploded reportedly leaving it horrifically disfigured.

Last year there were… injuries due to home fireworks. (Tell details)

Tell what pets were injured or affected. Non i just don't like to make pets afraid

New Zealand does not need to have fireworks on a British event day like Guy Fawkes Day. We should have fireworks sold on a day important to New Zealand like cristmas

The cost of a bag of fireworks from The Warehouse is… This only contains...fireworks. Families should spend that money on food and stuff like that

OR

New Zealand is a free country so we should allow fireworks in public area

New Zealand does not need to have fireworks on a British event day like Guy Fawkes Day. We could/should have fireworks sold on a day important to New Zealand like cristmas

Out of a population of 4.7 million people there were only...injuries

Only people who are stupid using fireworks get hurt.  For example...

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