This Week we learnt how to wsite a Six Sentence Short Story is a narrative and has Six parts. 1. Has ''one upon a time'' and introduces the main character.
2. Says there talent
3. Says there talent
4 Tells the problem
5. Tells how they felt
6.Tells how they got over the problem.
This is my ''Six Sentence Short Story''.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 28 August 2019
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2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi, my name is Bronte. I think you have done very good on your six sentence storys. Well done. maybe next time you can write their talent in and not there talent. I can connect with you because I write there when I should write their...
ReplyDeleteHi casey,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put a picture of Jumanji in and based it off jumanji.
Maybe next time you could put the background a lighter colour so its easier to read.
This also reminds me of the time I wrote something based of something else