FOXES
Foxes are yellow
Foxes are white
Foxes are beautiful like snow white
Foxes fur is as soft as a rug
Foxes sleep as tight as a bug.
Foxes fur is as soft as a rug
Foxes sleep as tight as a bug.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Casey
ReplyDeleteI like the Commitment you showed to writing your Haiku poem. I like that you chose to share about your favourite animal.
Remember when we are doing our Haiku we want the pattern to be 5/7/5. You have some nice ideas, but the pattern is not clear. Maybe we can look at this together next time.
- Miss Birtch